Has the potential to be a intriguing story. Body morphs are unique in comparison to most VNs. Just based on story lines alone, probably in the top 31% of VNs. Staging and body positions need some work but this is the Dev's 1st, most VNs improve as they go in this area. It is short but gets the overall intro in so that you can get an idea of the setting and ideas that will be explored. I would suggest the dev gets a patreon or something similar to provide updates if they do choose to move forward.