This VN's intro chapter is divided into two parts: 1A and 1B
1A was my favorite of the two. I liked the dynamic between Ashe and the MC, and it had a decent arc without feeling like the action was getting bogged down. Simple but it did the job.
1B, however, although featuring a good action scene, suffered in the beginning in setting up these characters and any connection between this and the first chapter. We also didn't really get to see the POV character of that part.
I'm willing to play another build of this game when it comes out to see what comes next, but for now it feels a little disorganized narratively.
Rating: 2.5/5 - Uneven
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