I really enjoyed my time reading this VN, Im glad I gave it a go and I'll be looking foward for more updates.
One thing I'd like to say tho, its that I really dislike the 4th wall breaks, how the protagonist speaks with the player directly and how often it happens, I don't know what other people think and what is the consensus on this, but in my case, they shove me out of that world you created and have been introducing to me.
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