This is so impressive even just for a demo!  Such beautiful art and the voice acting was great, a lot more of the dialogue was voiced than I expected too!

I also appreciate the warnings at the start, but I do wish maybe there was the option to have a brightness reduction in the settings for the flashes, it was a little bit hard to look at during the section with the game glitching, I don't have epilepsy, but my eyes are a bit light sensitive. 

If I had any other criticism, it may be that there aren't a whole lot of choices or nuance to the decisions the player can make as it can kind of just feel like you are just choosing yes or no a lot of the time.  Of course it is still a demo and only the beginning of the game and that may change later, if so then feel free to disregard that, my view is limited on that after all. 

But those are just small things, I can't really think of anything else that I would maybe suggest tweaking, the game really is fantastic so far!  I can't wait to be able to play more. <3