Love everything about it! I know people complain about grammar and length, but I don't have a problem with any of those. I actually find the pace of the story pretty normal and the main character relatable.

The characters are great, I like that you made them well-rounded, having both upsides and downsides. The art as a whole is great, I really like the level of detail you put in both the characters and the backgrounds, gives a bit more life to them. I do feel the need to mention that I also enjoyed the music we have so far, it blended well with the story.

As the others said, I felt spoiled by the amount of content you released for a first build and especially the quality of it. I will keep checking for updates of this project and I wish you the best!