Some words were dated or archaic. It sounds unnatural, especially since the setting obviously takes place in our modern times. I wonder if it’s just me, but I find it outright unbecoming that the script was written in a way that would be a better fit if it was set in the 18th century. Despite this, I admit the game was really good, and I'm looking forward to the full version. This looks promising.
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