I enjoyed the game quite a bit. The visuals were superb and the sounds were eerie. There were ominous moments that I felt added a lot to the games appeal. I liked the dialogue and story. There were some issues in the writing department; however, outside of that I think that you did a fantastic especially for the time constraints that you had.
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