I wouldn't define the game as bad, but it has more than one problem. I understand it's still a work in progress so I'll gladly change my review if an update will satisfy me.
One thing that bothered me a lot is that I kept finding mistakes in the text, so I'd suggest you find someone to proofread the product for you.
That's all, hoping for an update because I see potential, good luck!
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