a decently long, and extremely well written VN.  To be honest my only complaint would be that it was just a bit to dark and heavy for me.  Maybe it was because of the subject matter, challenging the reader about the reasons they might be trying to escape reality by playing / reading / escaping our self into these virtual worlds in the first place.  I will say that there were some good points made, but I honestly feel that some other stuff was just too far off the rails.  Maybe there are those out there that take it that far? I dont know.  I remember watching a movie about a guy who went crazy playing D&D and couldnt separate real life from the game either.  IMHO the very very tiny of number of people something like that could happen to were probably already "broken" in the first place.