Enjoyed the demo, and looking forward to seeing the finished project! I thought the designs were very cute and unique, I also liked the mini games (they weren't too difficult once you figured them out, and I thought it was a nice change of pace from the usual "being chased by something" that most rpgmaker horror type games fall back on).  Some criticisms I do have, mostly that the menu could be streamlined (I pressed x at some point and had to watch the whole opening again, not long but a little annoying to have to wait to get back to the menu). Oh, and maybe making interactables clearer to interact with (sometimes I would stand in front of something, like the cake, but would have to get into the right spot to press it, not to mention the notebook was right next to the cake so I had to be careful not to accidentally press the notebook), but even that wasn't too bad tbh. I think that's it though, the story and premise is interesting and I'm excited to see where it goes! Good luck to you guys!