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Animal Warming - Endless Arcade Game

A topic by Tinky364 created Oct 04, 2020 Views: 261 Replies: 3

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Tinky3643 years ago (2 edits)

Hello everyone,

I have been developing this game for mobile devices, but I also wanted to publish the PC version for easier feedback.

This is going to be my first game, by the way! Any feedback is appreciated.

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Animal Warming

Hop without collision! Collect as much as you can! The more you collect, the harder it gets.

Play it for free here: https://hinkywinky.itch.io/animalwarming

Wechenbetelly3 years ago

Since you asked for any feedback, I have some for your pitch:

Your first static screenshot offers no improvement over the animated gif, so you should sacrifice it to reduce scrolling.
I would separate the video and the screenshots more by putting the video after or before them.
And you might want to put your link at the end. Right now the first link any user will see when they are done with reading your pitch is the “Report” link…

Otherwise: I’m a fan of your animated gif! It told me everything I needed to know about your game and I have no doubt in my mind that your work on that singular image will do more for the influx of potential players than any other attention seeking effort you and me could invest combined. Time well spent! :)

Tinky3643 years ago

Thanks for your feedback, I will pay more attention to these issues from now on. :)

Wechenbetelly3 years ago

You’re welcome! Thanks for taking the advice. :)