Hi Cloud5 Game Studio,

Congratulations on the release! I took a look at your game page and trailer, here is my feedback:

• The image that sits on the top of the page seems to be the same as the main menu. I’d prefer to see just the logo and the background, without the menu options, as that might look confusing.

• One mistake I did recently myself is about the screenshot. I get it, you want to show all of the game has to offer, to be fair to users. The reality is, menus are not very important, and they don’t really offer value in a screenshot. There could be an exception for the character selection, but apart from that, everyone assumes there’s some form of a menu.

A delightful platform shooter game for all ages, challenge your friends in this mind-boggling game that features mind-boggling, frantic gameplay

• Repeating mind-boggling twice makes it sound less fun. It’s best not to repeat words too close to each other.

The game will receive updates with more weapons, players and levels.

• This may be just me, but I don’t think this is a selling point. Users won’t buy your game because of promises of more updates, users should want to buy your game because it’s awesome now! The updates are there to make it even more awesome!

• For the trailer, I think it spends too much time showing the characters in the beginning. It shows a total of 4 screens with 2 characters each. As a user, when I watch the trailer of a game, I want to see what the game is about as soon as possible. If you want to show all the characters, it would be more fun to show the first 2 characters, then show some gameplay, then 2 more characters etc.

• I’d also advice not to show all characters in the trailer. Remember that the trailer should be “part” of the fun. The idea being than once a user buys your game, they should be able to explore more content that wasn’t shown in the trailer.

• I find the narrative of the video a little predictable. It starts by saying “Play with 1 friend”, then it goes to “Play with 2 friends” and then “Play with 3 friends”. As a user, after the first message, I got the idea that this game can be played with multiple friends, I think at that point you should mention other things the game offers, like all the different weapons, or stages etc.

I hope you find this feedback useful. Obviously everything I’ve mentioned is my own opinion based on my experience. Feel free to pick only the ones you like :)