Hey mate!

Played your game for you.  Here is some feedback

1.  Graphics are pleasing, it was easy to tell what was background and foreground, what was an enemy and in general I appreciated the simplistic style.  So good job!

2.  There was some tearing in the graphics, not sure if this is happening on your end or not.

3.  When you jump off to the left at the start of the level, you fall infinitely.  I had to exit the game and restart.

4.  Sometimes the hit boxes on enemies felt a little harsh.  I didn't think i collided with them, tho this was only minor.

5.  I like the different enemies, but i wished there was more, and that were introduced sooner!   I also think there behavior should be more varied.  Maybe some could shoot or jump.

6.  I would of liked to of kept the double jump power-up going into the next level, would of added to sense of progression.

Anyway mate, I hope this feedback helps you improve the game, keep up the good work! :D

I would really appreciate it if you gave me some feedback on my game as well!

https://thesneak.itch.io/roopit-n-boopit

Anyway, have fun! :)

Hello!

I played your game and i agree with most of what theSneak had to day. Something that I think will help a lot is some small improvements to your character controller. adding variable jump height  and coyote time would help a lot. there are a ton of tutorials for this. Also i tried to use a controller but was unable to and i think that could be an easy fix in unity. 

Best of luck to you on your game!

Played through the game again for ya!

I see the visual tearing is gone.  Nice

Also you die if you fall off the level at the start now instead of falling forever, that makes more sense.

I was thinking tho, maybe through out your levels you should have some pitfalls like to the left of the start of each level, it would add a bit more variety to the challenges

I did find a bug for you!

You can stand on top of the candy here.  It also doesn't disappear when you collect it, which I think it did in the previous version, so is this bug?

I still think it would be cool if you kept your double jump power-up from that moment forward, but that is a design choice for you to make.

I did find another area of the game frustrating

This ledge here felt a bit unfair, it almost seemed like I had wait on the previous platform for the 2 enemies to be in the exact right place before moving forward.  I died here a lot more then I felt like I should of and it broke the momentum of the game.

Maybe an easy fix would be to put a small area where I'm standing in the screenshot.

What Scholley was saying about changing up the jump so that you can do variable heights is a good idea for sure, i think it would make the game more fun.

Another thing I was thinking about in early levels, this game might need a way to distinguish its self a little from other platformers.  The graphics help with that for sure, but I would add the double jump mechanic on the second level of the game.   And really work on adding more mechanics each level after that.

There are so many platform games out there so there is a chance that a player would play through the first 2 levels and possibly quit because there is no novel mechanics or systems being shown.  

Keep in mind, I am coming from the perspective that you will want to release a fully fleshed out version of the game and try to make money off of it.  If that isn't the case, you can disregard what I just said.  Its a perfectly playable little game, and I wouldn't want to discourage you!  Good job!  :)

Have a good day! :D

Played it!

This one is a has a lot of big improvements from last time!  The amount of enemy variance makes the experience a lot more enjoyable.

Also I love that you turn green when you eat the candy.

I have a lot of suggestions for improvements, but that's just because overall there is a lot more to talk about in this version of the  game, don't take it the wrong way, this version is a big step in the right direction in my opinion. :)

So firstly, it is getting hard to tell which is background and foreground, it wasn't noticeable in the last version when you couldn't fall to your death mid level, but now that you can its become a problem.  

Do you see how the darker line in the foreground lines up with the background?  So does the background icing line up with the foreground, it makes it look like its not a hole but a ramp, I could tell once I was looking for it, but it got me the first few times.  Also I think your going to have to have a greater difference between the background and foreground colors now.

Another thing I would like to see is some expression on the enemies, the first green jumping one in particular.  Even just giving it bigger eyes with pupils and maybe some slightly angry brows would work.  Up to you what kind of character you give them, lots of different things could work, a goofy expression may even suit this game better.  Some of the enemies already have this, but the first green bouncing enemy felt like it lacked it in particular.  I would also like some more feedback from the enemies, like a jump sound effect when you are close to them.

The floating platforms are a great idea, but they suffer a little from a problem i had with platforms in my own games.  You know when you walk up to ledge and there is nothing there, and then 3 seconds later a platform slowly creeps from off the screen towards you, and you think "ohh i was meant to be on that".  You might need to rig the platforms so that they are always close to the player when the player gets there.  It isn't a big deal, but waiting feels like your being punished, and you just happened to get there when the platform was on the other side, feels a little annoying and breaks the momentum of the game.

I didn't realize that the double jump candy was actually a triple jump candy!  Cool idea, but I found out by accident, could you tell the player that in some way?  Like maybe a little "3" "2" "1" appear over your head when you jump with the power up, and a different pitch for sound effect of each?  Not sure if that would work well or not, that's just what I came up with off the top of my head.

I thought of some other things while I was playing but i can't remember them all now lol.  That is probably enough for now tho! :)