What a wonderful demo! I actually had a lot of fun taking notes and asking questions about each piece of info i found.
I would love to play the full version and I had some critiques/recommendations
I came across 1 glitch while playing. I posted the [DISPOSE OF] note on the board and connected it to a red string. After a while it disappeared. There was a red string flying into the wall and vanishing.
I may have gone a little overboard with the strings but that was half the fun. However I couldn't see some information behind the strings, maybe having an option to make them transparent or they disappear when you zoom in would be nice.
The radio, the phone and the tv were all nice little touches. I wanted a lot more interactive elements in the office. If you have the time it would be cool to see more things in the environment you can manipulate. Changing the channel on the tv, changing the station on the radio, maybe a black light on the desk that can be turned on and off to look for clues on certain pieces of paper. The mood was the strongest point of this game and anything at amplifies the feeling of "being a detective" would be appreciated.
Amazing demo and the fact that I wish there was more is a good sign of it's potential.