- Like that you're using an RPG engine for battle.
- I like the choice of music once you start a new game - The Flawed Cyrstals opening intro is cool
- The intro is quite long with not a whole lot of agency of choice making. It takes a long time before you can make your first choice.
- The majority of the game is walls of text. Perhaps consider chunking these into small pieces so that it's easier to read.
- I would love a lot more choices in the intro.
It looks like you've put a lot of hard work into this. Great job and keep up the good work. When do you anticipate a release?