Fein's Deluge is my first significant project and first work of interactive fiction, and I would really appreciate some honest feedback from this wonderful community. 

Here is the link:

https://nick-petrou.itch.io/feins-deluge

And here is the synopsis, as per the Fein's Deluge itch.io page:

Fein's Deluge is a work of choice-based interactive fiction created in Twine 2 (SugarCube), inspired by the "open map" structure discussed in Sam Kabo Ashwell's post Standard Patterns in Choice-Based Games. Written in the second person, you divulge a vague, non-linear story by traversing a geographical space rendered in text — the village of Fein's Deluge. You "roleplay" a rookie field officer of the Witching Inquirium, a fledgling, who has been assigned to Fein's Deluge to discern the source of a surge of foul and prohibited magic.

I hope you enjoy exploring this miserable village as much as I enjoyed creating it.

Much love,

Nick Petrou