Feedback on game page

A topic by coa created 96 days ago Views: 100 Replies: 1

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i could use some free feedback on my Wizard Adventure game page

i have not receaved so many downloads inspite of being a nice game!

maybe i could improve the webpage i dont know please tell me

What I would improve is:

The game page is that it’s a little bare. Maybe a custom background would help?
The description is written a bit sloppily, with no capitalization and incorrect grammar. That would kind of turn me away from trying the game.
I think people are generally more inclined to play in-browser games than to download games. If it’s possible to create a version to play in browser that would help I think
The game says it’s an RPG but from the gameplay video it doesn’t seem like it is. I would expect more focus on the character/story/dialog etc

But other than that I think it’s a nice start that you have a custom title, include screenshots and a video!