When you meet Jessie the second time, the "I think I might stop by the pub" choice, even if you spent the day with Marion, Malcom will still say he only spoke with her briefly.

Apologies if there is a better location to share this kind of thing.

The third night after Alana's visit the drink seems to jump between whisky and scotch.

The transition between line 6087, "To my dismay, the song ends abruptly. I look up, and Balgair has abandoned his post as musician, and is hurrying back to the bar to serve two people who have just entered the pub.", and 6112 of script_chapter1_human.rpy of the steam release seems to have some tearing issues.

I’ll point these all out to the developer!