I like how a simple story change has altered the vibe of the introduction. It's subtle, but a good choice. Plus, who doesn't like getting more sex scenes out of it~? 😉

There's a couple spelling mistakes scattered throughout, but nothing a quick run through can't fix.

I really like the lofty pace of the story. It's serious without actually being serious, and that's 1ne the many things that makes xour VN stand out 😌

I also really like how there's a whole buncha sex scenes, then longer 1nes scattered between. I think this was a very good idea from a writer's perspective 🙂

It's great when xou break the 4th wall, btw. Always cracks me up 😋 keep up the good work! Looking forward to what else xou'll put Duke through~ 😏

aww thank you so much it means a lot!! I'm glad the vibe and energy I try to bring to the project is being enjoyed,