We're looking for any proof and beta readers who can give constructive feedback for the script of our upcoming visual novel, Love Amidst the Timeless Rift!
Love Amidst the Timeless Rift is a romantic comedy where you, the player, need to escape time stops by... confessing your secrets?! Our game is being made for Yaoi Game Jam 2023 and as such, we are aiming to complete the base game in about 2.5 weeks. Afterwards, development of the game may continue but for now, we're just focusing on that 2.5 week deadline.
As proof/beta readers, your main task will be to look over the script and identify grammatical errors, spelling mistakes, as well as just giving your thoughts on the script itself ("This part isn't clear to me because...", "The flow of this sentence is off...", etc). Although there will probably be lots of typos and missing words, we would greatly appreciate your feedback on the bigger questions, such as:
- Is the story engaging for you?
- Do the characters seem real?
- Do they talk and behave in a consistent manner?
- Are there specific sections that bore you?
- How is the pacing?
and so on and so forth.
All of these positions are unpaid as this is a free-work/hobby project.
If you are interested in joining us or just want to know more about the project, please reply with either your Discord name or any other form of contact!
Thank you for reading, and have a nice day. :)