I featured the game second in my list this month because I haven't loved a little indie game like this in a while. I hope you don't think my review is too harsh because the good so far outweighs the negatives. I don't know if you have any plans to keep working on it, but it's worth being expanded into a more fleshed out game and I don't say that about most of the game jam submissions I find. If you don't decide to do anything more with it, I'm at least glad you got it this far. Good luck with any future projects you're working on! 

As I said on twitter: thanks so much for this review! I don't think it is too harsh in any way. It doesn't always have to be 100% positive or 100% negative, I think. You managed to explain very well why you like my game while at the same time telling people that it's not perfect and has a few shortcomings (btw I agree with almost all of them!). As a creator it's cool to see people engage with my work the way you did here. :)