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Does this page look good?

A topic by Vipershot Games created Nov 30, 2021 Views: 635 Replies: 19
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says the cyclone...

can you give us actual feedback?

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ok noted.

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the page is now updated

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Hey the page look very white so add some graphics in the bg and try more fonts, you can look at my project page in my profile for a quick idea. very excited to play your game.

I agree, could use something there. This might be a good font for the titles: https://www.dafont.com/capture-it.font?l[]=10&l[]=1&text=LORE

The page has been updated

Airshot | Download Page

it's looking good but one more thing when I am opening the page in mobile devices, the background contains only one picture which is in top and the mid and bottom area are totally white so try to do it more better otherwise everything is good

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Airshot by PT Games (itch.io)

yeah now it's all good

thank you for the feedback

welcome and please consider checking my profile

It look good!

I think the number of pictures you have is really good. I would say that the repeated pictures (the ones in the "main body" that also appear in the screenshot column) don't add anything, since they're repeats. I would remove them from the screenshot column. 

Also, having red text (your "more information" section has this, along with all of the tags inside it) on top of a green background is kind of hard to read / can cause eye strain. Desaturating the green or the red (or changing the red to a black or dark grey like the rest of the text on the page) would be a good way to work around this!

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Airshot - Download Page