In Well Traveled:

I would change

whether you parted ways in good or bad terms

to

whether you parted ways in good terms or bad terms

The bold formatting is actually part of the suggested changes. This would be to make it clear that “good terms” and “bad terms” have mechanical significance (and then I’d bold them again at the end of the move).

When I got to the end of the move the first time I read it, I went, “Huh? What are good terms and bad terms? Where did those come from?” I assume my players would be more confused initially if I showed it to them. XD

EDIT: This is a GREAT MOVE, by the way! I love its take on the Bardic Lore and Port In The Storm that the DW Bard has.

Arcane Art

This should make it all a bit clearer:

Everyone present will feel the emotional power and meaning of your performance, but only your target audience will also be magically affected. Pick one:

In An Ear For Magic:

I would change:

or someone they taught to or learned from.

to

or anyone they taught or learned from.

which I think is better English and more clearly states what you seem to be going for here.

In Charming and Open:

I would add onto the second option like this:

if you answer honestly you can ask them a question from the same list, which they will answer honestly.

If this isn’t the case, obviously don’t add it. But if it is the case, this clarifies that your question will be answered honestly.

In Eldritch Tones:

Does this move cause Nasty harm to people? Or does it just cause the equivalent of Nasty harm?

If it actually causes Nasty harm, I would remove the words “equivalent of” from this move.

In It Goes To Eleven:

The word “fucking” in this move changes the tone of the game, in my opinion. I would need to remove it from this move for any of the groups that I play with. To make the game more Accessible to, say, audiences who don’t want sex to feature in their games, I’d remove that one word from the list.

EDIT: “Orgy” (used earlier) already has a sexual connotation. You could keep that one if you wanted to, although personally I would change it to something else as well.

The 10+ and 7-9 results of Reputation seem strange. It seems like, in some cases, I might prefer to get the 7-9 result for this move, so that I only have to say a positive thing about myself. I can’t think of any other moves where I would often prefer a 7-9 result. Is it ever better for the player to get a 10+ and share a negative thing about themselves?