The conclusion is good enough to stand in for the entire article - I'd actually put it on top as a "tl;dr" and let anyone interested in the minutiae read on. Also the line spacing makes it a little hard to read (for me) - it seems like every sentence is a paragraph. Sections should be shorter, tighter, and more visibly differentiable. "Good news" and "Bad news" are not informative titles - title your sections in a way that answers the question "what am I going to learn in this part?" - this is the way to respect the reader's time.