Loving the first chapter. There's a lot going on and I'm interested to see where it goes...
A few things I noticed. The end of the discussion with the bully, she says "let's just focus on MC", rather than the player's name.
going through doors left and right is kind of tricky to line up.
The walking looks... so odd. Like they're walking backwards, and with a frame missing as they step...
I'd like a 'skip' (to blast through bits I've already read recently and are just replaying) or way to make the text 'instant appear'.
All that aside, I'm really liking this! I'm psyched to see where this goes. I'll likely be joining the discord at some point too, haha! Keep up the amazing work.
(Also, awesome idea with the orbees. That's cool)