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Okay review time! I thought the overall concept to be reasonably well done. The dialogue between characters was quite nice. The main issues were around some of the tone and pacing of the mall section in relation to the other parts of the game as the mall has a consistent pace that is different from the rest. I found the art to complement the story and works well with the overall content. I'll give this a 3/5 (OK/average).

Okay review time! This is a short and sweet vignette about some pretty heavy mental stuff going on with out MC. I liked the narration in how it clearly communicated this without being unreasonably direct. I found the theme somewhat difficult to parse (I might've just missed it) due to the nature of the vignette. The combination of visuals with the topic was also very clever. Overall, it is unique and evocative, so I'll give it a 4/5 (good).

Took some time to get the libraries on my computer to cooperate with me to compile it, but now it's done. Also sorry I was being forgetful about the rules of alternate versions. So no need to worry!