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Request: Faye Chen

I'd like feedback on the story and whether the ratio of words to images was enjoyable or a deterrent. If you think it was the latter, can you tell me why? Thank you.

In pursuit of her missing brother, a Royal Canadian Mounted Police officer enters Putwell, the world's densest slum, and is soon entangled with one of the triads that runs it.

Faye Chen is a 12,000-word kinetic novel told with the aid of 121 full-size images and music. There are no choices or mini-games.

It features smoking, scenes of intense violence, and themes related to grief.

Available on Windows, Mac, PC, and Android.

https://wmfl1980.itch.io/faye-chen

* Some security features on the above devices may mark FayeChen.exe as a virus. It is not. I have only made one app, and that makes me "untrustworthy". I assure you, it's a clean file made with care on Renpy. I hope you enjoy it!

Thank you for your reply, PanOut. How come you're unable to "ballpark" my question here? I'd rather not get into a back and forth only to find your services beyond my means. I have no doubt you're worth what you ask, and value your time and effort, I only doubt my ability to compensate you. Take care.

Thank you, Fractured Mind. $2100; USD, I presume; is far from my price range. Take care.

How much would it cost to program a 13k word visual novel with 121 fullscreen images, 28 quick time events, sound effects, and music? There are no sprites, only text with full screen images, and no choices or any mini games beyond the tap here, slide there quick time events. Thank you. Take care.

How many hours would it take to program a 13k word visual novel with 121 fullscreen images, 28 quick time events, sound effects, and music? There are no sprites, only text with full screen images, and no choices or any mini games beyond the tap here, slide there quick time events. Thank you. Take care.

Goodness Rey, what a review. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for playing and spending some time letting the team know how you felt. Take care and again, thank you.