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Firstly, I have no complaints about the writing. There is a lack of content to be judged, but I did enjoy what was there. 

That said, your styling of the way this twine game is presented needs work. Most importantly links being both the same color, and the same font makes using things like cycling options unintuitive. You should probably set the links to new passages, and those choices made by cycling a different color than the rest of the text.

Looking back at it you probably did mean the pin you had written about earlier, but because it came right after talking about writing my brain tried to correct it to pen.

The writing is pretty good as for the content of what you're trying to portray. I did enjoy it. There are several spelling errors I noticed along the way though. Mostly minor stuff like a "wiht" instead of "with". A more specific thing I will point out since you said English isn't your first language though. At one point you were writing about a writing instrument which Harvard was using. The word you're looking for there is "pen".  A pen is a writing instrument, a pin is something different depending on context.  I know words that are pronounced the same, but spelled differently make English confusing.

Working on yes, close to anything that I would release? Not yet. lol

Okay I believe I found a bug in chapter 3. I was supposed to be heading to the stairs on the second floor of a place, and then suddenly I'm in a pig barn, and the story is talking about two characters Renee, and Lester who haven't been introduced to me at all.

Check your security settings, and make sure you're not running anything like noscript. You can always turn those things back on after playing, but those settings would probably block needed features for the game to run. Same with trying to do it in a private window.

I want to tell you I learned a lot by reverse engineering this. A lot about Harlowe, anyway. Some suggestions though. The buttons kinda clump together and don't look great that way. Adding margin: 2px 2px, fixes this pretty nicely. Also, using the browser history for a back button can cause issues.  (link-undo:) Works like the built in back arrow, and works better.

This is a twine game. There is no exe, the game can be run in any web browser, using the HTML file.

Yeah, same thing just happened to me. Nothing on this page, or in the story indicated that the story was unfinished. It's kinda both bad, and lazy to not at least inform people. I was confused as well.

Both that Tumblr post, and the last dev update on this page are 3 years old at this point.  I think calling this abandoned is a safe bet.

Error on boot every time. 

While running game code:
  File "game/scripts/graphics_lewd.rpy", line 102, in <module>
KeyError: u'cg massage 1 butt'

The same message every time I open.

Edit: It's the patch. It will run without it, but I get the error every single time if it's in the "game" folder where you instructed it should be put.