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Ya, I work in war zones and I've seen that it usually drives up inequalities. Most people lose everything and a few merchants, smugglers, the local commander or politician, get very rich controlling the diminishing resources. 

Ha that's a great idea

Good job

I like that change of pace and tone from many of the other stories. Great work. 

Great work. Flows well. 

I'd like to read about the whales too

Clear and well written. Nice dark tone. I enjoyed it. 

Great work

Fun story. I'd like to read more of it.

Well done. Good clarity and flow. Unique concept. 

Great concept. I want to read more of it. 

That's a fun story. I want to read more of it. 

Great voice. The characters come out well. 

Great concept

You write action well. Good flow. 

Great work

Creative 

Good voice. I want to read more. 

Great work

Ya, and what is the significance of a cross to vampires in the OPR universe?

I enjoyed the format. Would love to see it developed more and see more of the story. 

Great work

This is great. Very clear and evocative. 

Great world you've started to build. 

It has good voice

Enjoyed the change in perspective. 

Good voice. I enjoyed the setting. Feel like I need to read the rest of the story.

Good voice. Feels like it's part of a bigger story. 

Good voice and engaging characters and setting. 

Great characters and creative concept. 

This makes me miss smoking a pipe. Great character and setting. 

Great hook. Well developed character. I really enjoyed it. 

I'll have to play this. 

It's a fun story.

The characters come out really well and the ending is a twist. Really well written. 

You know, now that you mention China Mieville's vampires, I am sure that is part of what was in the back of my head when I came up with the concept. Subconsciously at least. 

I enjoyed the main character. I'd like to read more about him and the setting. 

This is great. It is unique and entertaining. 

Good pacing and flow. I like the imagery. 

This is delightfully unique. Well done. It has a good flow and the character has good voice.