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As if I wasn't already having a hard time choosing which RO to go for first 😅 I'm so glad he survived, MC lost enough as is 😭

Everytime I finish a new update I'm always hungry for more! My poor little easily flustered MC doesn't know what to do with all the attractive people surrounding him and I love every second of it.

Looking forward to the next update!

Hi! Thank you for the thorough reply, and no worries about the length!

About the curse thing, that was the moment with Fri I was talking about so that must be it. I decided my MC wouldn't ask about the terms in the moment as a child (being already shy and now with fresh trauma), so I had no idea he couldn't talk about parts of his past.

I appreciate you taking the time to read my initial comments and reply!

I really enjoyed and was intrigued by the prologue, just some minor typos and awkward flow (from variables I'd guess) here and there, I unfortunately didn't think to make note of where though, sorry!

The beginning of chapter 1 confused me however. I'm a little bit lost about what we're setting out to do, I'm not sure if I missed something but it does feel like I'm missing a bunch of context. At one point a curse is mentioned as if I was supposed to know about it but had no idea what it was talking about. There's also a point where my MC asks Muir what happened with the Garm and it just completely skips any response to that question.

I have some screenshots of some coding errors I came across but I apparently can't fit them all in this comment so I'll reply to this with them!

Sorry this was so long, this story is intriguing and I'm looking forward to more!

I just went on a rollercoaster of emotions. Elation at the release, despair at the prank, and finally delight at the consolation bonus stories.

As a DnD nerd myself, loved that oneshot the most!

Thoroughly enjoyed the update! Loving the themes revolving around fate so far and I can't wait to see how that plays out. And once again, I love the continued depth of the MC, I'm usually drawn to playing sweet beans but for some reason in this IF I couldn't help myself from making a charismatic and manipulative ass who cares deeply underneath all that.

One issue, the mobile version has some funky formatting (I ended up playing on my computer because I couldn't wait, but I prefer mobile):

I love Archer so much, can't wait to see where this day out with them goes!

I noticed a slight error in the end of Chapter 2, where it presents your personality. It said I was more cautious than confident, despite my character sheet saying the opposite and me not picking a single cautious option throughout!

The rest of the update was wonderful! I'm a sucker for playful flirty characters so Em is right up my alley. 

This is quickly becoming one of my favourite IF, magitech settings are so cool to me and I'm loving all the characters.

Enjoying the update so far, but I got this error after the first choice with the affinity trainer that completely crashed my game, leaving me no choice but to restart. My mc isn't a fire affinity despite the error, he's wind if that helps you find what's causing the error.

I'm already so hooked, I look forward to the continuation!

Just a couple of visual issues: None of the pictures were loading (I'm assuming based on their placements that they're graphics), and the stat bars disapeared for me in the stats screen halfway through. I'm on mobile if that helps!

That was such a delight to read and I can't wait to meet the rest of the cast, they all sound so intriguing! The choices felt so fluid, and I already feel like my MC is more well fleshed out and complex than I'm used to in IF, which is very fun!

I can't seem to play on mobile, it cuts off the bottom of the screen, this is as far as I can scroll down on the first page after starting a new game, so I can't any farther:

I tried multiple browsers on my phone, same issue in all of them.

I'm loving the game so far but I've run into what I assume is a bug during week 23, where I burn to death no matter how high my fire magic is (I'm playing on story mode and my understanding was that meant I was highly unlikely to die in the first place). Even at 40 (which meant I had to take significant cut out of the magic disciplines that my character is actually supposed to be focused on and meant reloading saves as far back as I was willing to go before it got tedious) I still died on story mode.

Edit: this is in Darryl's route btw. And I can now confirm that even 65 fire is not enough, which is a massive jump from the previous checks as far as I can tell.