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To be fair it is quite difficult to write good action so I would still say kudos to those who tried.

Thanks kindly. I was trying to think what was missing from the story, and you're 100% right, there's no opposition. I might see if I can do some updates without the time constraints of leaving the thing to the last minute and pop an updooted version in the Discord.

I like that we don't know why the hunter is helping. I feel that adds to the story.

Thank you, sir/ma'am/boss.

I'm assuming the unlikely alliance part is someone from Duchies of Vinci becoming a Vampire?

Excellent example of "show, don't tell." Loved it.

His story is exceptional. Definitely worth the read.

Thank you, that was exactly the intended affect.

Thanks for taking the time, i appreciate. Although i think it was SupNerds who was concerned about the amount of comments on his submission.

Look, these are soldiers. A fart that brilliant would brings tears of joy!

Very clever name

Directed by Edgar Wright

Solidarity!

“By being something worthy of being loyal to”

That's going to stay with me!