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OPR Writing Jam #8

Hosted by onepagerules · #oprwj8

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A jam submission

The Queens IreView project page

A Hive Lord is forced to risk starting a war

Submitted by TheGlyff — 1 day, 7 hours before the deadline

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Results

Criteria	Rank	Score*	Raw Score
Concept & Originality	#5	4.182	4.182
Overall	#9	3.879	3.879
Flow & Clarity	#10	3.773	3.773
Adherence to the Theme	#11	3.682	3.682

Ranked from 22 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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TheBlueGamingTroll293 days ago

I enjoyed the story; I am left with wanting more!

Hobby FuzionSubmitted293 days ago

A nice path on developing the Hives into something different, looking forward to more stories from you.

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The Track Not Taken

T3PP3Submitted294 days ago

Well done, I like how it expands the lore for people who are fresh to the setting. The pacing was adept, same with the word choice.

I'm pumped if you're attending the next jam, if that means there'll be more stories like this.

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whenimtiredSubmitted294 days ago(+1)

One of my favorite parts of the GDF universe is that the Alien Hives aren't mindless or driven through simple animal instinct. You did a great job of transferring that to story!

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An Injury to One

Peacemaker1965Submitted294 days ago

Interesting introspective on the mindset and social construct of the Hive Lords.

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Lord Blackvayne's Dilemma

TheTestBearSubmitted295 days ago(+1)

“By being something worthy of being loyal to”

That's going to stay with me!

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