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Love the over saturated reverb here! Beautiful. Great vibes you have going on here too.

Nice, and done on a mobile! Wow. You got guts. Hidden Village is defiantly the best song here. You got some good beats here as well. Good work!

Wow, I love that first track. Gets you right into the space theme. Solid work here.

Great work and story here! Love it. Really cinematic music too. First piece and track 4 were my favorite. Just solid orchestration and sound all around.  

Thanks for listening Korux and for your kind words! They made a lot! Indeed, some parts are not quite organic enough for me either. That is something I will need to address when I come back to the piece at a later date.

Wow, I love this ambient track! Great job with the textures and different sounds. It is really immersive. Great progress also because you change up the whole length of the song. Overall solid track here! 

Hey Einel! Thanks so much for this feedback and your thoughts. Good point about the first track. I should make the brass sound more heroic. Oh, for sure I need to make if breath more.

Good idea for the third track! Yeah, I can make the synths sound more threating. Oh brother. I suppose the VSTs are not the best, but they were bought XD I just need to learn how to put more dynamics into them. I had figured it out, but was on a time crunch so I didn't get to impalement it fully. It for sure needs more oomph!

Again, thanks Einel. These are things that I will look into when I come back to the piece later.

Wow! Very cinematic indeed! You defiantly got the epic vibe here. I like the vocals and use of strings. So lush and beautiful. Great work here!

Awesome beat and theme here! Solid work here you two. 

I love the orchestra elements you have in this! Very well done. Only thing I didn't really like was that weird panning. To me that didn't really fit. Besides that, great work here! Love all of the tracks. 

Wow, I love the soft vibes you have with this one. Great track!

This has got some good kick to it! The instrumentation is great. I like the vibes of the whole song. I think you did a pretty good job with the synths. But yah, they are hard to use. What this track needs is more reverb. Other than that it is good. Solid work here!

8bit? I love it! Well done here!

World #1 was awesome how you brought in new textures slowly and it just went from low to boom! Great work on this track.

Homeward, wow! Great dynamics on this second track! The song just emersed me into your world. I love your instrument set and how you have a low chord in the background and then bring in the harmony. Great stuff here.

Sacrifice was just as good as the others. Your beginnings to each song are unique and moving. Wow, the power of this track is great. Good work on the instrumentation here also.

Overall, solid submission. I mean, you got some talent here! Great 8bit vibe mixed with guitar went together very well.

Wow, I have forgotten how lush and good sounding Musescore can be! Great work here with the orchestration and sounds. Only thing is perhaps some extra work on the dynamics a little. Like some different textures or loudness's. Overall, very beautiful and lush sounding! Great work here.  

Nice vibes you got here. The drums are good and you have some dark themes in here. Wow! Very spooky and feels like one of those darker space shooters or something.  Behold It Is He was my favorite of the four. Solid cello and strings, with chilsti and such. Loved it! Great work here.

Hey Kale! Thanks for listening and providing your feedback! Yeah, I need to work on getting it to sound less like Midi. I am still learning, but I am glad I was able to pull together something like this. Defiantly could have done the tension and release a bit different. Maybe I will revisit that when I come back to it later.

Thanks! You guys are an awesome community.  

Very spooky and empty feeling! Wow! What a great ambient atmosphere you got going here. Solid work here. It almost feels like you are floating in space, with only you and the sense of your spacesuit! 

Very cool! I love the 8bit sound and techno here. Very well done!

Dude, the deepness of this track is insane! I can feel myself peering into the sky with a telescope and finding new stars in the cold dark space! Such a great track you have here. I really like the ambient vibe and sound you put together for this one. Some really solid work here! I like how you mix together different instruments, like the guitar, and strings, and others to give it that expansive feel.

Hey there! Great submission here. I can just image the designer warping around the universe with a pencell in hand. Wonderful stuff here. I love the Jazz feel it has, and that piano is very rich! Great work here.

Wow, these tracks were so powerful! What skill you have here. Goodness! I really enjoyed it. You have great dynamics, range and skill of the instruments, and a powerful vision of theme here. Wonderful. I am just blown away by these tracks. I can't really add any feedback but that! Although, those jungle like noises at the end of the first track sounded a bit odd and out of place. Wonderful submission here!

Hey there, nice work with this one! It has some great progression and the Berlin Orchestra sounds great! Good work here. But I am going to tag onto EinelTheFox comment about dynamics. Adding some varying sound levels will add a huge amount of depth. Also, the piano does seem to get drowned out (No worries, these are all things I need to work on as well!). Overall, very solid composition here!

Hey Amorphic! Thanks so much for listening and your thoughts! I indeed go for the more epic tune and vibe this time around. The only thing was that I wished I had made the ending to the last song better. But oh well, I can fix that later. Thanks. I try have good orchestration! 

Thanks for listening! I am glad you liked it. Discovering the Unknown was the hard one for me! I had trouble keeping the melody going forward. Also, the ending is a bit abrupt. Wish I had made it better. Again, thanks!

The eeriness of this track! Goodness! So much ambiance and random sounds. Really good space vibes here. I love it how you created the samples using the raw files. That is very unique! I don't know if I could call this a song though lol. It is more like a sound track with noise? Really a ambient song. Great work.

Thanks! I apricate that! I did like your track :)

Wow, each track has such a different feel. Great work here. My favorite is defiantly the first track. The last two have a very spooky yet spacing vibe to them. Solid work here with the mixing, use of textures, and instruments. It is quite unique and I could totally see it as a soundtrack to a game. Love it! 

Your welcome! You are an great musician and composer! I really enjoy the stuff you make.

Now, these were such fun tracks to listen to. That bass and beat really keeps you in the groove! I can imagine one of those old 2d space shooters on the NES or PC. Really cool instruments and almost 8-bit sound! Each song hit hard and kept hold of you the whole way through.

I really liked the second song. You had some good different sounds and moods in it, the only problem was you ended it so abruptly. That third song comes in a close second. Great range you got with your instruments. 

Overall, very solid! Great work here.

Wow Kale! Really clean mixing! And such great vocals and range of songs. I mean, it really took me to another realm. Great work with this one, some of your best work in terms of mixing, balancing and color. Really solid. I am sad you couldn't finish the second track. But I am glad you could get at least the first one up. Love your work as always! Keep making this music, is awesome!

Very interesting themes you've got here. I like it. It blended well together and your mixing is really clean. Wow I can't believe this is a eight minute track! Goodness! And it has lots of energy on and off, which gives it good flavor. I like how you use vocals in there too with the synths. It was a good mix. Great job here.

Grunt. I am in awe of this track you have created. It has so many elements to it, a slow but ambient like beginning, the lush guitar section, strings, sounds, sky. All so beautifully captured. You are always making such breathtaking pieces man! Keep it up. Your instrument playing is really good. 

I love 1:02 when the guitar starts to strum in. It was really good. Then at 5:20 also. That was really good! Then the transition to softer tones at 7:00. Just really solid and beautifully captured. It reflects a sense of wonder and what a thinking imagination has of the realms beyond our own atmosphere! Again, really great work here.

Thanks for sharing! It was special to listen to.

Wow Amorphic! This is a wild piece! It's so spooky and spacy! I love it. Great job here and even better because you generated the sounds yourself. Crazy. You fit the theme very well with this. 2:02 was my favorite part!

Solid work once again man. 

Pretty cool submission you've got here. I love how you used the harp throughout, as it brings that instant space feel.

The touch of piano in the Archives was brilliant. Nice work here! Love the arpeggios. I think it was one of the best songs.

Every track was solid! Great work here. I like the instrument set you picked out too. Fits very well for a space themed adventure. The Glock is good and sharp, so is the harp. Great elements all roung.

What I would say is work on your mixing to bring out more of the colors and sounds. And maybe some more dynamics, which I am honestly terrible at too.

Love the electric guitar man. Really powerful. Great work here. It did feel like a journey through space. Really clean instruments and mixing here. The sound is so rich and moving. I like the sense of space and movement you got as you drifted from one section to the next. The guitar was defiantly the strongest element here. Great job! Bravo!

Oh cool! Another Ableton Live person! I used it to make mine. It is nice to see other people using Ableton and not just me haha.

Ambiance, goes with space hands down. Really love the reverb you have on it! Very ambient indeed but in a good way. Good progress and instruments too. Its a nice and clean little song. Maybe, it needed to be just a little bit longer to make into a journey or story. And even a second track to accompany it. 

Just breathtaking you two. Stunning music here. Yo this is super professional. This could be in a game right now and be some major soundtrack that everyone news. It is clean, engaging, and fun. And your story is awesome. Well done Blue Lava! Some of your best work. I love the switch between orchestral and guitar and slow. It was really fun.

I love how this was a group project. It makes it even better. You two are quite gifted in music! Some of the best music I have heard of late. Thank you for sharing. 

Oh my goodness dude! This is by far some of your best work. Love the vocals and just the whole song. You are so talented! The guitars and instruments work so well together with your voice.

I love the beginning dialogue, that really set the mood for the whole song. I really hope you will be able to finish this project. Its awesome. Crazy respect to you! Vocals are hard and you did a great job of mixing them.

You are a boss Einel. But as Kale said, the only thing that could be done to improve it is the mixing I think.

Yo dude! You used LMMS! Respect. I use to use it, but have moved onto Ableton Live. Anyway, you have something special here. I love the high tones, they make is sound so open and spacy. Great job. Really good composition here. Just you might want to watch out for dynamics. Adding some dynamics will really add a lot of depth to your song. (This is something I struggle with myself) I like the horns too! Great mix of instruments. It certainly has a good space feel about it. 

Thanks so much Eetu! This is great feedback. Yah, I wish the last track was more powerful too, I meant there to be more songs but ran out of energy and ideas. I will take all of this and use it wisely! Thank you again.