Hey Einel! Thanks so much for this feedback and your thoughts. Good point about the first track. I should make the brass sound more heroic. Oh, for sure I need to make if breath more.
Good idea for the third track! Yeah, I can make the synths sound more threating. Oh brother. I suppose the VSTs are not the best, but they were bought XD I just need to learn how to put more dynamics into them. I had figured it out, but was on a time crunch so I didn't get to impalement it fully. It for sure needs more oomph!
Again, thanks Einel. These are things that I will look into when I come back to the piece later.