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I have to be honest here...
I dislike this game.

It looks amazing. I love the art and everything, but the gameplay is terrible.

Initial area was way too hard because I didn't know I could dash (It does say controls in the description, but you could visually explain your controls better), and I didn't know how to interact (again, do something like a popup that says E or F). Also, the jump was hard and annoying to control, because as soon as you let go of space it instantly plummets you downwards.

First level was really hard until I found out how to dash. When I did learn dashing (by looking at the controls in the description for the first time lol), it was still hard.

By level 2 I was already 8-10 minutes into a supposedly short game. Pushing the block into the button was horrible, because if you pushed it too hard or too soft, it would completely miss the button and soft lock the level, making me do it all over again. (Also, this is when I realized how hard gates are to see in the game).

Level 3 was harder and there were invisible blocks for some reason, but I was getting the hang of it when one of the checkpoints soft locked the entire game with one of the invisible blocks.

I have to say, 1 star for fun-ness, 2 stars for originality, 3 stars for theme, and 4 stars for visuals. Average of 2.5 stars. Not the best, but I still see a lot of potential in this game. I could see a game like this improve dramatically and become a very impressive and amazing indie game. Just visually explain controls (lots of people like me out there not reading descriptions), fix more bugs, balance more stuff, add a restart button for convenience, and keep on improving.

Yeah, chud, keep doing that animation on the bottom for a long time. Like a lot. Then you wont be so fat.

(JK lol!)

ooooooooohhhh i gotta do that sometimeeeeee

I killed my fingers but I beat the game so its worth it

I beat the game, my keyboard, and my finger bones

Very funny

i just realized theres a secret but im too dumb to find it lol

ok tho but why can you bribe to leave but cant even open the elevator ToT

That makes my day! Thanks for playing :)

Yo you found them all!!!

Even the dialogue is about someone being too lazy without knowing they'd miss the chance to say goodbye. :,)

I like this one a lot. It really gives lazy in its own unique way.

cant properly rate this game yet as i have to get another player to see its full potential

Glad you like it <3

We've got an inquisitive one here

I love the poetry, the visuals, and everything. My rate averages 4 stars.

Im gonna be honest here.

For fun, I'll say 2 stars. I had no idea what to do for most of it, it was kinda buggy, and I think I reached the end without knowing it so i ended up flailing around and giving up. Needs a way better tutorial. Also, imo, the keyboard controls are very weird. You should use space for jump and use the mouse for throwing or smth, or at least let players change controls, but this is just a personal preference.

I'd say 5 stars for originality. I've never seen a game with these kinds of mechanics, and they could be used in really cool ways. Just needs a better tutorial/practice spot to learn them.

For how good the theme was incorporated, 1 star. The game has nothing to do with being lazy, except for you doing all the work for the cookie, in which case, cookies are non-sentient objects and you're basically going by yourself. All you really did is slap what appears to be a face on the cookie, and that's the whole theme of the game in one face. Otherwise, it doesn't really feel alive at all. It's a good game, just doesn't really follow the theme.

Lastly, it's nice to look at, i guess, 4 stars on that. Nice backgrounds and color scheme I guess. I don't really pay too much attention to how a game looks (unless it's impressive like truly) cuz i care more about the play and mechanics and stuff. Also, cool intro too.

All in all, it averages out to 3 stars. Good. 👍

if you wanna make a roblox game join a roblox game jam, not an itch.io game jam lol.

I actually never really thought about the violent part lol thanks!

You could definetly make it faster between customers coming because at first i was spamming buttons and couldn't figure anything out.
(no but wait it says so in the description im dumb but some people dont like to read so explain visually)

Definetly needs background music.

Also, nobody really knows what a "normal" cookie is. No normal person eats plain cookies lol (no offense if anyone does), id say plain cookies as opposed to normal.

I also dont really get lazy from the game. It doesnt feel lazy.

The tutorial text isn't really nesecarry if it doesn't even explain how to play.
You should put something like "drag the cookie jar to the goal" at least.

Also, kindly, you shoudn't join a game jam if you can only make a tutorial before it's over.

The tutorial text isn't really nesecarry if it doesn't even explain how to play.
You should put something like "drag the cookie jar to the goal" at least.

Also, kindly, you shoudn't join a game jam if you can only make a tutorial before it's over.

It's a bit hard to rate this because it's smack dab in the middle of everything for me, but I do like it. Even though it's short and has 1 level, it feels pretty nice. The only thing is, after a couple of plays, the game gets pretty easy to beat without jumps. You dont really need jumps. Also, it might be better with more levels.

Or just Wawa

I dmed both of you guys

also by the way im 404foundWawa

sorry ill be in a bit my phone isnt working with discord and i cant get it on this computer so i have to use tthe other on

Op oh sorry
I think i made an account before ill send u a DM

again thanks for this!

k its been 2 days!
https://404foundwawa.itch.io/dont-even-bother

k should be done by the end of today (EST).
It has all the main mechanics and ideas and stuff but ill be updating it every day or other day with new content
Thanks for this!

I dont really use discord but ill try lol

Wait one more question, HOW do you submit late? Do you just leave submissions open or do i use discord or smth? (I'm rather new to itch.io)

im working by myself and i have stuff to do like school si can I submit my game like 2-7 days late please? How long exactly can I be late

this game is way too hard make some easier levels at first

Edit: okay you need more than one sentence:

Put the easier levels at the beginning. After reading the comments, I'm seeing a lot of people warded off by the first few levels, despite one saying the later ones are easier.

If the levels at the very beginning are way too hard and look impossible, what do players think is still left in the game other than hard rage impossible puzzles? Or you could, at the very least, add star difficulties.

I know it's in the order of creation, but you need to put it in order of difficulty instead as to not ward off players, and also maybe get more playtesting for the harder ones and make there a tiny clue as to how to beat it.

Adding onto that, you need a much better audio experience. You need some music, maybe a move sound effect, and an eat sound effect. If you used Godot and put music on autoplay, I think Google and other browsers don't allow that, so you will have to play it with code.

Trust me, once you add this stuff, average playtime might double, or triple, or whatever you think is gonna happen.

This was really fun, hard, annoying, stupid, i hate, hate,

Really cool game but so hard lol

Wow, this game is so cool and creative! I love The Creature Of The Forest, he's so goofy.
And Thingy I guess.
Can't wait for part 2! Unless it's already out! I have to check! I'm pretty sure it's not!

https://404foundwawa.itch.io/four-petal-sun

Four Petal Sun is a short and wholesome point-and-click story game made in a week for a school project with some updates coming after. If you like short stories or you're too lazy to play a skilled game, give Four Petal Sun a try.

(I've advertised this game a couple times if anyone's getting annoyed I can stop if you guys want lol I just seeing how many people will play)

it would kinda be a game where you code to disable cameras and alarms and open doors and stuff, and one person would be fighting and the other would be hacking ,and there would be 1 player support.

so basically you would be a character that would be going through rooms and making scripts to do things like disable cameras, activate/deactivate alarms, turn off guard machines, and stuff like that, and its 2 player (with 1 player support) because i always imagined one person doing the hacking  and one person fighting off enemies for the other person so they can code.