ooh, nice! more things to look forward to!
also, i am probably not at connoisseur level but with my family being opera performers i sure know a lot of stuff. that is why i am also happy knowing you are a huge nerd of theatre didn't expect a kindred spirit here, so yeah preach them the beauty of theater! let them know art!
cheers brother!!
well, this is a great game the story is compelling and attractive enough that i never skipped a dialogue(but one of the reasons i really didnt skip is cuz theres hella lot of alias,codename and i will loose track of who is who if i blink! :D). and becuase of that, i noticed a few phrases that disappears fast i have to press back a few times just to read, a minor issue tho. speaking of names, holy fuck! its just a prologue but you already introduced what? like 20+ characters already? that is insane(in a good way) i admit it was confusing the first minutes but gets comfy throughout. too much question to ask right now actually, tho that is not a problem cuz this isnt even the first chapter yet, being a prologue did its job real good. nice character designs! out of all vn i read, ash and the current mc(too many names he hold so i'll just call him mc) are particularly unique. i also hope you can add more volume to the music, probably just me but i want to hear the music louder on my phone but it is still pretty soft even on max volume. speaking of music, the one in the red room(the one with ayako and kitty) slaps hard!.
also, are the cast of commedia dell'arte gonna be a part of the story? or are they gonna be like the narrator? anyways looking forward to how you gonna create la signora and isabelle :D
more power to you and your team!
here is my honest opinion.
first of all, the thumbnail is kinda misleading. probably my fault too cuz i assume too early.
next is honestly it is still too short to give any proper comments yet but based on the few pages i read, premise of the story looks interesting.
next is probably just a me problem but the text color change kinda feel uneasy on my eyes.
and lastly, i request a few more pages! i like the way you tell stlory. very direct and not confusing. will give this a shot if you continue, just saying 😁
yeah, that's all for now
yo, this is beautiful!
im all for the character designs but bro, the environment and details go hard too! color pallete is easy on the eyes. soundrack is also good. not to mention the story is going in a good direction. i am more of a 3d realistic guy but damn this got me into anime style VN now.
im sorry i couldnt support financially but i want this game to continue so i hope future people who read this will get interested!
