here is my honest opinion.
first of all, the thumbnail is kinda misleading. probably my fault too cuz i assume too early.
next is honestly it is still too short to give any proper comments yet but based on the few pages i read, premise of the story looks interesting.
next is probably just a me problem but the text color change kinda feel uneasy on my eyes.
and lastly, i request a few more pages! i like the way you tell stlory. very direct and not confusing. will give this a shot if you continue, just saying 😁
yeah, that's all for now