well, this is a great game the story is compelling and attractive enough that i never skipped a dialogue(but one of the reasons i really didnt skip is cuz theres hella lot of alias,codename and i will loose track of who is who if i blink! :D). and becuase of that, i noticed a few phrases that disappears fast i have to press back a few times just to read, a minor issue tho. speaking of names, holy fuck! its just a prologue but you already introduced what? like 20+ characters already? that is insane(in a good way) i admit it was confusing the first minutes but gets comfy throughout. too much question to ask right now actually, tho that is not a problem cuz this isnt even the first chapter yet, being a prologue did its job real good. nice character designs! out of all vn i read, ash and the current mc(too many names he hold so i'll just call him mc) are particularly unique. i also hope you can add more volume to the music, probably just me but i want to hear the music louder on my phone but it is still pretty soft even on max volume. speaking of music, the one in the red room(the one with ayako and kitty) slaps hard!.
also, are the cast of commedia dell'arte gonna be a part of the story? or are they gonna be like the narrator? anyways looking forward to how you gonna create la signora and isabelle :D
more power to you and your team!