I didn't expect to hear a mix of Ukrainian and Japanese lyrics in a vocalsynth song!
The lyrics are deep and well written, much respect for that
Though this choice of voicebanks is pretty common, they work really well in this song
My only criticism would be mixing, I think it needs some work especially with frequency equalization
Overall well done, that's a great song!
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Listening to this song was a very pleasing experience!
It felt like I'm listening to a lost Green Day song and I really liked it
Both the structure of the instrumental and the vocals (including harmonies) were great
I think that maybe it could've been prefected by mixing drums in a way that would make them sound a little bit louder and more "in your face"
But anyway that's a great song and I'm sure I'm gonna listen to it many times
Wow, you actually put growl in this song! Very good choice which adds to originality
Composition of the instrumental reminds me of such bands as "SiM" and "Fear, and Loathing in Las Vegas" and I like it!
Also, the message of this song is very relatable to me. I wrote a song that touches similar subject once.
I think that sumbission needs a little bit of work with mixing, but still this is very a solid song
I was so glad to hear a ska punk song among other submissions!
And of course I like the high quality of production.
The lyrics may be a little silly but the main message "Shit happens but I'm still here" is very hopeful
I'd say it would be better to make brasses a little bit louder, but that's just my opinion and I respect your artistic vision
I love this song so much, it just brings me joy!
The sincerity and sweetness of the lyrics is one of the main reasons
The harmony of this song sounds so unique and original which makes it stand out to me personally
I only wish it was longer and with more progression for the instrumental because, I NEED MORE
You did a very good job with this song!
The instrumental is good, Teto's vocals are lovely and emotional and the lyrics are relatable
There is an interesting thing about mixing. First I thought that the instruments during the chorus are too loud and it is better to make them quieter. But then I realized - that mixing choice actually resonates with the lyrics because of how it overwhelmes our ears while trying to be something it is not supposed to.
I absolutely support such artistic choices and wish you luck on your musical journey!
Omg, the vocals and lyrics are GREAT!
A good metaphor for trying so hard to hold onto your life even when you have a lot of struggles ahead (at least that's what I see in those lyrics)
I love the instrumental and the atmosphere it creates! My only wish is for it to have a little bit less repetativeness during certain parts
Overall, I really liked this song!
What a great shoegaze song!
I love the dreamy vibe of the vocals and instruments
This song feels like I'm in the middle of the crowd that gathered to listen to a performance. Which is why it reminds me of good times and makes me feel nostalgic
The lyrics are simple yet so emotional, i really like them!
You definitely did a god job with this song!
(I also think you should make the overall mix louder :D )
What a nice song!
The instrumental is probably the best part of this sumbission as it has a funky j-rock vibe with some positive atmosphere
The vocal melody and harmonies feel good while listening
Sometimes vocals felt a little bit muffled on top of the instrumental but it didn't make this song less enjoyable
Good job!
Peak
This song just hits the right spot in my brain
So creative and atmospheric!
You did a great job on tuning, it sounds very realistic and emotional with all those sudden cracks and slides
The instrumental and downsampling effect you used was right on spot
And the lyrics are amazing of course
With some more work on mixing, I'd call that song perfect
Definitely gonna listen to it a lot
Thank you for sharing your story with us!
This is such a beautiful song full of bittersweetness
And that was a good thing to make the lyrics slightly ambiguous, I can definitely relate to them
I can even say this song is hopeful to me in some way because the ability to remember sweet moments of our lives is what makes it possible to go through hard times
I'd say that some more work on vocal mixing would be great, but overall - this is an amazing song!
A DnB song with 3 different voicebanks and a rap part? I'm in!
That was such a comforting exprience, I like how catchy this song is
And the vocal melody is amazing, can't get it out of my head
Maybe a little bit of balance for some instruments would change the song for even better but even like that it's just great
Sometimes horrible experience may be an inspiration for a song and I guess this is one of the cases
I feel so sorry for you and hope that you'll get better
Talking about music, the instrumental is great. Feels like something famous vocalsynth producers would write
The only thing - I wish the vocals were mixed the way that you can hear it even during intense parts of the song
Overall, you did a good job!
