Wow, you actually put growl in this song! Very good choice which adds to originality
Composition of the instrumental reminds me of such bands as "SiM" and "Fear, and Loathing in Las Vegas" and I like it!
Also, the message of this song is very relatable to me. I wrote a song that touches similar subject once.
I think that sumbission needs a little bit of work with mixing, but still this is very a solid song
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Thank you so much! I put growls on my songs on a regular basis.
95% of the songs I actively listen to are Japanese metalcore and loudrock bands. SiM and FALILV are among those bands in addition to other bands like ARTEMA and FEAR FROM THE HATE. I'm happy that the song reminds you of those bands, because they hold a massive influence on the way I write my songs. There's just something different about J-metal that I end up only listening to western metal on very rare occasions.
Ngl I was very skeptical over my own lyrics, since I always have a tendency to write about inexplicable feelings. It's honestly a relief that you found my lyrics relatable. Thank you very much.
I apologized if the mixing sounded rough af. If you're interested, I uploaded an improved mix over on my SoundCloud. There's also a Japanese and Instrumental version available, so I hope you can enjoy my song even after the jam ends.
Again, thank you for listening to my submission despite the flaws!