You did a very good job with this song!
The instrumental is good, Teto's vocals are lovely and emotional and the lyrics are relatable
There is an interesting thing about mixing. First I thought that the instruments during the chorus are too loud and it is better to make them quieter. But then I realized - that mixing choice actually resonates with the lyrics because of how it overwhelmes our ears while trying to be something it is not supposed to.
I absolutely support such artistic choices and wish you luck on your musical journey!