There are several bits of "impossibility" in this one. For one, he's a very good warrior. He's determined and strong...and it makes you wonder what his reason is for continuing when he's outnumbered. You feel sorry for the Jackal. And the last line "What a futile waste of life” is so sad...because in my honest opinion, anyone fighting with this Jackal on their team would have been proud. It would have been such an honor, with how driven he was until the end. So tragic.
Interesting read. There are some grammatical errors toward the end, but I'm not sure if those were intentional for how the character speaks. Overall, nice job!
This was well put together and complex, yet understandable. I really enjoyed the character of Sassio, and how determined and ambitious he was. Great piece overall!
I felt so sad for Tza-Quol. It must have been so terrifying and embarrassing to let his people down....and without an explanation is even worse! On the other hand, I chuckled a little, because somehow there's humor to it that I can't put my finger on. Thanks for the entertaining read! ☺️
