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The visual novels you make are so inspiring. Thank you for bringing this legend into the world in an accessible, efficient, and easily digestible format, so more of us can learn about the true heroes of the Wild West.

Really great art and style! I love the creative array of objects and the whole premise. Gameplay was fun and satisfying.

Thanks for the feedback! Controls for skipping/speeding through dialogue are in the description, though it’d be more intuitive to have them in-game – point.

Would have loved for it to be a 40,000km race, around the equator… nice work! Agree that the coins should be easier to pick up, e.g. by running into them instead of clicking. Also, might’ve been a glitch but i couldn’t get the descriptions of the shop items to show up - they’d appear then disappear after an instant

This game was a very calming and reflective experience. Loved the sound effects and the hopeful tone. Wish it was a bit longer! The ending felt a bit abrupt.

Very cool graphics, immaculate vibes! Found it almost impossible to redirect the car in the time and space allotted when the car backtracks after hitting an obstacle – it would be cool if there was a way for that to not be instant death. Nice work!

Super hard but fun – the moving platform concept is great! It’d be helpful to have a larger viewport or at least one that catches up to the location of the player a bit quicker, because it’s almost impossible to see where the you’re going for some jumps. Using the mouse is a little clunky. 

Holy mackerel, kudos to you for making this mind-bender of a game! A hugely enjoyable and well-written adventure that I did not expect to actually send shivers down my spine. I can’t even fathom the process that went into making this. Hope to see more games like this!

This is a unique and well-executed idea! Forgot about the revert button… I’d love to see more levels of this. It’d be cool to have an object that has be erased and reverted to be erased again to make a different object, if that makes sense. Well done!

Really well done graphics and well-executed concept! I definitely got too caught up in reading the wuttpad fanfiction and ran out of time…

Very cool how the letters just skitter off the page! I also liked how I didn’t have to type letters in the right order lol. I kept instinctively backspacing when I thought I’d made a typo but this mechanic made it so that was unnecessary. 

Very nice game! I appreciated the info sheet at the end of the game. Would love to see this idea developed further, maybe with greater difficulty as the days progress. It could be interesting if there was a way to introduce moral ambiguity more clearly – whenever the people revolted against censorship, I thought “ok, good ending,” so I was a little sad that the only way to get the full game content was to be the best shill you could be. Nice work!

The mimic ability was definitely a fun one to have – great start to a turn-based RPG. Hope this one gets developed more post-jam! 

Would love more levels – the music is very relaxing and the graphics are beautiful. That said, would love for there to be some framework for why the objects are what they are and how they came to be in the scenes. A very engaging play with very simple mechanics :)

Awesome level design & clean mechanics with fun art :) 

Stunning graphics and concept! The controls were pretty slow/unresponsive for me (echoing some other commenters). Hope to play again if there’s an update post-jam :)

Holy this game is hard but I love the concept! Maybe it could start out slower and gradually get faster? Very neat game.

Really nice twist on the classic idle game – super clean art style, a joy to look at. I always think I can beat the odds and this game disproved that neatly

Nice art style! The position tracker for the pencil was really well done (and the foreshortening on it is awesome, for that matter)

Dang this game is hard! The difficulty definitely ramped up really suddenly with the geese and the helicopters showing up at the same time my first run bahaha