you suck. i hate you and what you took away from me. my friends, my dignity, my self-esteem. i already accepted defeat and left you guys afterwards. i venture out to look for other opportunities to start anew, to grow as a person, and yet you still rub it in my face by joining this jam. you still cling on to that one victory you had against me, but that's the only thing you have going for you. when that's gone, you're a nobody, insignificant among the 8 billion people living in this planet.
anyway really like the textures here, although it comes off as more sunny than it does rainy for me, maybe its the key, i'm not sure. but that doesn't take away the artistry. otherwise i have nothing to say. keep it up man!
thanks! and now that you point it out, the piano is pretty loud and muddy, will try to fix that in the future. as for the dynamics, i never really had that in mind, i just made it consistent like the drums and bass, but i get where you're coming from, it can be a bit annoying. i'll see what i can do with that. thanks for the feedback!
i think you're missing the bass for the whole song except for the last part, might have to do with the automation you have for it. otherwise pretty solid submission
yeah i agree with you on the drums being too loud. as for making the second half interesting, i didn't have many ideas. i thought the drums already added enough variety. the intention was for it to play in the background, so i thought to keep it simple. adding more stuff, like a countermelody, could work if i had enough free time to think about it and work on the track. thanks for the feedback!
thank you so much! and yeah, it does need some sort of buildup, but i never figured out how to do it well, so i just left it as is. thanks for the feedback, and you too as well!
