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Ok, thank you so much for your thoughts. I really appreciate it. 

Ok, thank you so much for the suggestions. Could you please tell me your thoughts on the story in general? Whether you think the story and the characters are actually interesting. If you are not able to, that's fine, too.

I played your game. I thought it was really nice and fun. I did run into this weird error on the first level: if you click off the screen after trying to spin the wheel, you can no longer spin it, and you have to reload the itch.io page to try again. It happened to me when I was spinning the wheel, and the power bar was behind the white line or in the center of the bar.

Thank you for the response. I already have a design for the UI in mind and some background music. I just need to implement them sometime this week. What were your thoughts on the story and the choices you made throughout it? Cause I feel like the story is kind of bland, but I’m not sure how to fix.

Thank you so much!

I’ll play your game and give my thoughts on it tomorrow when I have time. Thank you. 

Here is the link to my game: https://quietkalliope.itch.io/the-perfect-pirouette

I want to submit this CYOA game to the jam, but I can tell there is something off about the story and the dialogue. If anyone is interested in reading, here is the link. Please tell me your thoughts and what I could improve. Also, I know that it doesn't look good when it comes to visuals right now. I will implement all of that later. Thank you!

Link to Game: https://quietkalliope.itch.io/the-perfect-pirouette

Update: The game is now on restricted access because I am going to start making changes to it. If you would still like to playtest it, please write a comment to let me know. Thank you!

Hello, I have been having issues with my itch.io account. For some reason, whenever I comment, I get the message that I need to wait for moderator approval due to recent activity. I have not done anything malicious, and I have had my account since May 2026, so I am not a new user. My ticket number is 375911. Is there any way for me to finally be able to comment on games? Thank you.

Thank you your kind words. I really tried to be intentional about the game's atmosphere, so I really appreciate it. 

Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm really glad you liked the game. Thank you for the kind wishes. I wish you all the best as well.