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Very well written with a good reflective pacing, great subtle use of the theme, and not too heavy on lore just for the sake of it. And you tell a whole story too, not just an excerpt. Heartbreakingly satisfying. 

I like this. Good Plaguery. Couple typos, but otherwise not much to fault at all. 

Cool premise, decent execution consisting of good prose and only slightly clunky dialogue. I'm more interested in what comes next than what just happened - that team up would be great to read more on.

Loved this. Near perfect short story with great pacing, and it gave a really good entry point to the lore without smothering the story in it. That being said, I can't decide if the theme integration was earned or tacked on at the end.

Quite elegant. Another edit and this would be hard to fault. Would definitely read more.

Great command of lore, wonderful incorporation of cheese. 

Loved the depiction of the rats. Fabulously written, great tone. I'd read more from this writer. The applicability of the theme was really clear throughout, but I feel it fell a bit flat at the end there. 

A unique character voice and cool concept, and a clear representation of the complex technological themes in play, but I felt pretty lost throughout this. And the theme tie in felt like it may have been an afterthought. 

Heh, I really liked this one. Good twist on the theme there.

Really well written, but I couldn't figure out how it tied into the theme at all. Not sure what I'm missing, but a delightful read nonetheless. Good luck.

Really well written, but I couldn't figure out how it tied into the theme at all. Not sure what I'm missing, but a delightful read nonetheless. Good luck.

Cool concept, I liked the representation of the characters, and definitely wanted a bit more of this story. There were a few typos and clunky wordings that would have been picked up in another round of editing. Keep up the creative writing, and good luck!

Cool concept, I liked the representation of the characters, and definitely wanted a bit more of this story. There were a few typos and clunky wordings that would have been picked up in another round of editing. Keep up the creative writing, and good luck!