A unique character voice and cool concept, and a clear representation of the complex technological themes in play, but I felt pretty lost throughout this. And the theme tie in felt like it may have been an afterthought.
I actually started with how I wanted to work in theme. I think I just tried to keep it so obscure that none of it came out coherent. I definitely want to make a revised version that focuses less on the "where" and more on the "why"
