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Great update! Nice ending for the book too. Also bit belated Happy holidays and happy New year.

Few issues i notice , mostly few broken variables and one hard coded? name.

https://imgur.com/a/cpVZ42q

https://imgur.com/a/Aauv3cC

Hmmm Yes.

Save:https://gofile.io/d/6dgoXw

Chapter 1 is complete. Chapter2 nearing the end.

He_she, at least worked when i edited it.

Great update.  Loved reading it.

Now just to replay part one to get max Nisa point :D, so i can pick all the options!

Great story overall, but i do have a little bit of criticism. 

Hopefully this space serves as adequate Spoiler 

That being how Vs(in my cases Vanessa) intro was handled. The whole murder attempt was glossed over far too fast. I don't think violent schizophrenia should be excused as easily. Especially if missing meds a single time is all it takes to go homicidal.

Probably it will be explained further down the story what the actual reason it happened was. But still characters seemed far to nonchalant about it.

Take your time. As much as i hate delays IRL stuff take priority.

Sorry about that, here's the actual image for the second error.

Nice chapter!

Also few issues/errors i noticed:

Save:https://gofile.io/d/BtYL62

Save:https://gofile.io/d/6cTw4e

Few bugs i found, probably already reported, but still decided to post here just in case. 

Chances are that my old save file is at fault, if so i apologize.

"Go outside to get some fresh air." : softlock

"Decide to apologize to Sameer.": errors

"See if you can remember where the bathroom was. You could use a moment to yourself." : softlock

Save file: https://gofile.io/d/9RtMi2

Wonderful chapter. As always can't wait for more. 

Can't wait to see how "daddy issues" between fishboy and guru unfolds.

No worries. RL takes priority. Will be waiting.

I'm not sure what my issue is, but the game loops between waking up and after after showing Mantis the "plant powers"

Happens with both new game and build a save, this is on firefox

I recorded it here

https://imgur.com/a/hok5T93

Or is it the end of update and i 'm misremembering where previous one ended.

I think a word is missing here.

Save: https://gofile.io/d/R5OLtK

Bit of a story inconsistency

MC bashed their hand after waking up first time, was taken to healing bath, should be aware of baths.

Save:https://gofile.io/d/JXNgJX

Bit late, but: Happy holidays !

Loved the "new" chapters. Salyra hate was excellent. Only little issue i had was the scene where Rana is hiding from the bullies, i would have loved a way to simply leave without interacting, but that's just a minor issue.

Also few minor issues i found:

"Cotten" should be "cotton", unless it's a material i haven't heard about.

Save: https://gofile.io/d/uLagbk

Dena got wrong prounoun

save: https://gofile.io/d/sConi7

I think there is a word missing here

Save: https://gofile.io/d/iXFWqD

I think someone played Subnautica when writing this chapter :D. Just give me thos feels.

Edit: Just finished, love it so far, can't wait for more.

Also i have a question. If i choose not to take healing potion when attempting to speak, does it lock into mute mc or can i try again some time later?

Love this! Also found another bug.

↓

Save:
https://gofile.io/d/8V6DG2

Missing letter


Save:
https://gofile.io/d/RX1YNc

Found a broken variable

Save:
https://gofile.io/d/XFC4ju

Just finished the chapter. 

From brief interaction with Kestrel, gotta say they seem fun :D.

Can't wait for more.

Fresh playthrough started today

Broken variable.


Save:
https://gofile.io/d/DMEKSt

Wrong name 

Save:

https://gofile.io/d/aLE9cL

Broken variable

Save:

https://gofile.io/d/mSfJlH

Didn't drink the wine

Save:

https://gofile.io/d/gIdCeG

Then? Wrong word?

Save:

https://gofile.io/d/cauiLu

Love the chapter. Flirting with Nisa is fun, can't wait to see how it will blow up in MC face :D

Never mind about the buttons, Dark reader add-on broke them.

Very nice start, was a good read.

Few issues tho:

Imported save data from previous game

Save:https://gofile.io/uploadFiles

Icons seem to be broken

Misspelled word in Adas codex entry

Error in Enids codex entry

And last and most important issue:

FUCK YOU ITCH FOR NOT NOTIFYING ME THAT THIS UPDATED!

👍

No worries, just making a joke :D

For some reason i have this nagging feeling that i should start a new playthrough :D

Error if you try to change pronouns :

Take your time. As much as i personally want to play this, your health and personal life takes priority!

Loving the chapter 2 so far, but found this broken variable. Also chose not to have a nickname.

This is a fresh playtrough started just few hours ago.

Save: https://pixeldrain.com/u/9VHGTCbr

Missing space:

Found a broken variable

save:https://pixeldrain.com/u/GgmQev3T

Look ma, I'm famous!

Glad i could help!

Liked the first chapter. Good start. Like the dynamic between characters and can't wait to see how it will work as the story goes on.

Wrong pronoun

Save: https://pixeldrain.com/u/kzQ1dc7G

One more thing, isn't it supposed to be Moriarty?

Found a broken variable, i used a save from previous version if that matters.

Save:https://pixeldrain.com/u/guLCnaKh
P.S.
Should i keep adding save likes this? Always worried that pixeldrain looks slightly suspicious.

Maybe try and see how Superstition did it? Ask the dev maybe? She managed to have some sort of save export at the end of seasons.

Bit of a technical question, finished the act 1 few days ago and just wanted to know how will the save/choice transfer happen?

A new character creation and then pick what happened in act 1 or some sort of save transfer?

Mostly just want to know if i should keep save from the ending or i shouldn't worry about that.

If twine is anything like other html things, try checking css file, appearance related things are usually there.