Great story overall, but i do have a little bit of criticism.
Hopefully this space serves as adequate Spoiler
That being how Vs(in my cases Vanessa) intro was handled. The whole murder attempt was glossed over far too fast. I don't think violent schizophrenia should be excused as easily. Especially if missing meds a single time is all it takes to go homicidal.
Probably it will be explained further down the story what the actual reason it happened was. But still characters seemed far to nonchalant about it.