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I quite like Crimson High.One of the things I especially like was the monthly release ;)

I changed the name. Your characters STILL call him by YOUR name. Not the one I gave him. Do you comprehend?

Why did you give us the choice to name the MC if every other time someone speaks to him they call him Montero?

As I feared. The quality of the writing as well as the "animations" dropped significantly with new devs. And Centoria has had a complete personality change.

Honestly a huge a shame.

The amount of grammatical and spelling errors in this VN is downright hilarious considering you had MC make a comment about "people mess up they're their there"

Hey mate.
Got a question. If the MC is 19 and his sister has been living with her adopted mother for over 20 years then that means she was adopted before he was born. If that's the case then how can her "adoption papers" at the church mention a brother?

Also. Proofread your work... "Chains of Density"? xD.

You've transposed a LOT of letters, to the point I'm wondering if you're dyslexic? 

I have some bad news for you then.The people working on the project now are not the people who made season 1 or 2 for that matter.As far as I understand it the original dev(s) abandoned the project and the current ones picked it up. So you're probably going to see a shift in the writing. Maybe for the better, maybe not. Who knows at this point?

Well chug some Benadryl and proof read your work then xD

Sorry mate. But are you allergic to definite articles? Also known as "the".

Dev literally made a post saying this isn't porn. So... No it's not getting "h" scenes as you so cowardly call it.

Heyo mate.
Please consider getting a native English speaker to proofread your work.
There are so many grammatical and syntax mistakes that it's actually distracting. 

5 days?
Last devlog: Dec 27 2023

Heya Dev.
I finished 0.3 yesterday and I gotta say kudos on the translation. It's A lot better than your first try. There are still a couple of odd words in there but not enough that it's a problem.
Story is interesting and the characters are likeable.
Keep it up!

https://kuro-kai.itch.io/lycoris-radiata/devlog/761520/important-please-read

Welcome to Steam regional pricing.

23rd*
Twenty-third not twenty-threeth

Dev has used up his second chance by now.
Game is dead.

Interesting project.
If I may.
Let the user decide where to install please.

This game is a fever dream xD

What a terrible logic.

For what?

Heyo.
You need to learn the difference between "There" "Their" "They're"
"To" "Too" "Than" "Then"
Or get someone to proofread for you.

That being said I'm enjoying the novel so far.

I've said it before and I'll say it again.
If a dev is using Itch for their game they have an obligation to keep their Itch page up to date if they want to be taken seriously.

Apparently not.

Haha honestly I didn't. Nice :D

Hey I made you a compliment sandwich. I was plenty of nice ;)

It could also have been a hell of a lot worse.
You new to the internet? ;)

Heyo.
Game's good so far.
Story is interesting.
Characters are likeable.

But your proofreading needs a bit of work.
I mean misspelling "doctor" is embarrassing really :P
"alot" is not a word. Literally doesn't exist.
And I'm assuming you just flipped a coin for using either "a" or "an"
Also don't directly translate a German idiom. "sicheren Tod" is "certain death" not "safe death" xD Even Google translate knows that :P
Lastly, and this one you should know since you Germans (I'm assuming you're German) are so fond of capitalizing every noun; names are capitalized in English. That includes the names of countries.

I'm honestly not trying to be an ass. Just trying to help you improve

And I really did enjoy the game.

PS. English is my 3rd language, German my 2nd ;)

Better late than never :D

If you want to be taken seriously and appear professional as a developer you
1. stick to your word
2. support your game on EVERY platform you use for it.

If the dev has an Itch page for it, I shouldn't have to go trawl through the internet to find the release he has promised.

Edit:
Don't get me wrong I appreciate you pointing out that it's available elsewhere.
You were just trying to help.
Also I appreciate the work that's gone into this VN. I've enjoyed so far and am looking forward to future updates.

Wasn't something supposed to happen October 22nd at 7pm UTC?
Weird. Must have been my wild imagination. ;)